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Rippling Stream

RIPPLING STREAM

Like water slowly
But surely…
Flowing agitatedly
From up in the mountain slopes to the valleys
Settling in a ricefield paddy
Thus, setting agri-business happy
And worldwide in joy!

Like feelings mutually
However, carefully…
In a fertilized egg incubately but surely
The convalescingly makes life normally
Lusciously and deliciously stable
A second time around sounds compatively enjoyable.

The ripple
Now, no more murmurings
But, a rambling…
Streams ever reverberating
Loudly caressing and embracing
Of luteous colors accentuating
A masterpiece of abstract to a mural!

Dalila  Agtani
6/4/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/9/2011 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Dalila. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:44:00 AM
way to go beautiful filipina! :) congrats with hugggs! :)
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:04:00 AM
ongratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Dalila
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:15:00 AM
Beautiful poem here Dalila...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:32:00 PM
congratulations Dalila with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:04:00 PM
best cheers, D for the special win! :) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:52:00 PM
Congrats Dalila on your sweet success in Constance's contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy with luv.. excellent..
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:20:00 PM
Hi again Dalila :) enjoyed your write here-- beautiful and I like the journey that you depicted in this stream of yours :)
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:31:00 AM
Your comments are an inspiration.... and your poetry is like a flower in bloom....always Michael
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