Rippling Stream

RIPPLING STREAM

Like water slowly
But surely…
Flowing agitatedly
From up in the mountain slopes to the valleys
Settling in a ricefield paddy
Thus, setting agri-business happy
And worldwide in joy!

Like feelings mutually
However, carefully…
In a fertilized egg incubately but surely
The convalescingly makes life normally
Lusciously and deliciously stable
A second time around sounds compatively enjoyable.

The ripple
Now, no more murmurings
But, a rambling…
Streams ever reverberating
Loudly caressing and embracing
Of luteous colors accentuating
A masterpiece of abstract to a mural!

Dalila  Agtani
6/4/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Dalila. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:44 AM
way to go beautiful filipina! :) congrats with hugggs! :)
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:04 AM
ongratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Dalila
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Beautiful poem here Dalila...Congrats on your win..
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:32 PM
congratulations Dalila with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:04 PM
best cheers, D for the special win! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Congrats Dalila on your sweet success in Constance's contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy with luv.. excellent..
K. Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Hi again Dalila :) enjoyed your write here-- beautiful and I like the journey that you depicted in this stream of yours :)
Falotico Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:31 AM
Your comments are an inspiration.... and your poetry is like a flower in bloom....always Michael
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