Joanna Daniel Poet Free verse

Rippling River

A

river

gurgles and glints

with grandeur and gumption,

water winds its way through wetlands,

OVERCOMING OBSTACLES IN ITS PATH,

rapid, rolling, rippling, rubbing

p e b b l e s

smooth.


06.30.2021

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Smita Kulkarni July 21, 2021 at 9:27 AM I too see a river just the way you have described Jo!! What a coincidence! Perfect description of the river I see :)

Mike Bayles July 12, 2021 at 6:43 AM I love the way the poem gives life to the river. Very good surprise ending.

Alkas Poetry July 5, 2021 at 10:51 PM I found the conception of this poem wonderful... in the rhythm and in the choice of words... splendid... salute,, alkas

Gershon Wolf June 30, 2021 at 8:03 PM Love the way the river rubbed those pebbles smooth. Cheers, gw

Rama Balasubramanian June 30, 2021 at 4:16 AM Lovely imagery, great alliteration, picture is perfect,

Tom Cunningham June 30, 2021 at 12:59 AM Love the imagery Jo, and can hear that soothing sound that accompanies it. Tom

Victor Buhagiar June 30, 2021 at 12:43 AM Beautiful ideas. The pebbles get smooth with time.

Mahtab Bangalee June 29, 2021 at 10:36 PM just excellent

Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 10:23 PM Your images are really beautiful.