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A river gurgles and glints with grandeur and gumption, water winds its way through wetlands, OVERCOMING OBSTACLES IN ITS PATH, rapid, rolling, rippling, rubbing p e b b l e s smooth. 06.30.2021

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Date: 7/21/2021 9:27:00 AM
I too see a river just the way you have described Jo!! What a coincidence! Perfect description of the river I see :)
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Date: 7/12/2021 6:43:00 AM
I love the way the poem gives life to the river. Very good surprise ending.
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Date: 7/5/2021 10:51:00 PM
I found the conception of this poem wonderful... in the rhythm and in the choice of words... splendid... salute,, alkas
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:03:00 PM
Love the way the river rubbed those pebbles smooth. Cheers, gw
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Date: 6/30/2021 4:16:00 AM
Lovely imagery, great alliteration, picture is perfect,
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Date: 6/30/2021 12:59:00 AM
Love the imagery Jo, and can hear that soothing sound that accompanies it. Tom
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Date: 6/30/2021 12:43:00 AM
Beautiful ideas. The pebbles get smooth with time.
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:36:00 PM
just excellent
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:23:00 PM
Your images are really beautiful.
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