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Rippling Joy

Spring in air Shine of sapphire sky Blue-bells soak Daisies dance Butterflies drift in soft breeze Joy ripples through me. ______________ February 20, 2022 Syllable count : 3 5 3 3 7 5 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Give Me A Shadorma Sponsored by : Sotto Poet

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Date: 3/7/2022 1:28:00 PM
Great imagery, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/7/2022 6:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this: so delighting and delightful. God bless you.
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest ( Give me a Shadorma). Your submission is stunning, Subimal. Kindest Regards
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Date: 2/21/2022 7:15:00 AM
Good to meet you, Sinha-Roy! Love the full relation to senses in this and the best of emotion, too! Great flow. Amazingly succinct. Would have taken me x3 the words and ines. You’ve a wonderful pen! Blessings for your day! sally
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