Seren Roberts Poet Tail-rhyme

Ripples of the Water

Watch the ripples of the water
The trickles sounding  like laughter
As pebbles tickle its flow

Pools of delight with crabs inside
Limpets clinging on against the tide
Children's faces aglow

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 10:59 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Seren. Love Carol

Poet Destroyer A December 4, 2012 at 4:58 PM Seren., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 4, 2012 at 1:30 PM Big Big Congratulations my little Welsh Leek . well done xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2012 at 9:43 AM congrats Seren on a lovely write and win luv .. Seren Roberts December 4, 2012 at 1:07 PM thank you Linda....Seren

Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 7:51 AM Lovely, congrats! Seren Roberts December 4, 2012 at 1:09 PM Thanks Richard.....Seren

Debbie Guzzi November 21, 2012 at 2:25 PM Lovely remnant of summer picture! fav line [Limpets clinging on against the tide] Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love Seren Roberts November 21, 2012 at 5:24 PM thanks Debbie, i can remember then being impossible to move... Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 21, 2012 at 1:47 PM What a lovely tail rhyme you have done here it's nearly as good as that pencil sketch you did o f my son which I may post as a blog lol xx Seren Roberts November 21, 2012 at 1:54 PM Thanks for the compliment ( i think it was) lol, you trying to embarrass me ....Seren

Kash Poet November 20, 2012 at 10:26 AM Very nice Tail rhyme by you here Seren!Best wishes for the contest. Seren Roberts November 20, 2012 at 10:08 PM Thank you Kash Poet