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Ripples of the Heart

the water ripples as a gentle summer breeze caress its surface, her eyes reflect waves of love, his heart will soon find her shore 2-18-2020 Let The Pens Flow - Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Valerie Staton

Date: 3/6/2020 8:16:00 AM

Wonderful!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/26/2020 9:01:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 2/25/2020 9:42:00 PM

Congratulations !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2020 1:07:00 PM

- Beautiful poem of love ... together they become the perfect wave, Joseph :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/25/2020 9:38:00 AM

That last line hold the whole poem.. Wonderful win Joseph..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2020 6:54:00 PM

I , as well, LOVE the last line of YOUR tanka. That is where you know you have done well, when the end is so awesome!!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/20/2020 10:12:00 AM

Good luck for the contest Joseph - very vivid thoughts expressed. Blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/18/2020 10:15:00 PM

Beautiful in every way!! "his heart will soon find her shore" Oh my!! This thought leaves me breathless. A keeper for me. :) Brandy

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/18/2020 4:04:00 PM

Very romantic Joseph. Good luck. Tom

Joseph May
Date: 2/18/2020 4:41:00 PM

Thank you Tom..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/18/2020 3:17:00 PM

A lovely romantic flow and tone!

Joseph May
Date: 2/18/2020 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Vijay..

Jan Allison

Date: 2/18/2020 3:15:00 PM

oh so beautiful Joseph!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 2/18/2020 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Jan...