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Ripples of Love

Ripples of love I feel my perspiration drop Into the bucket as I mop with rippling circles that expand I’m awed by this phenenomenon As if something that God had planned You are my dearest golden charm resplendent with your golden hair Your hands are clasped as if in prayer A rippled laughter disarms me Your saintly humor does enhance The floor is dry and we shall dance and undulate like Sands of Time Rippled excitement as we cling Perhaps conclusions it will bring To enter in another clime Ripples in the water Contest Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron August 27, 2017

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Date: 9/1/2017 10:33:00 PM
Hi Ralph, when I read your first stanza, I had no idea how romantically it would end in the last stanza! Very beautifully done my friend. Good luck! :)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/6/2017 12:27:00 PM
Hi Susan: I'M VERY DEVIOUS (HA HA)
Date: 8/30/2017 7:24:00 PM
Such a beautifully romantic piece you have penned, my friend! I love your creative take on the theme, your wonderful imagery and flow. I am sure it will do well in the contest! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 8/28/2017 5:49:00 PM
what an interesting idea, Ralph, going with ripples of LOVE. Well done!
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Date: 8/28/2017 5:11:00 PM
Gentle thought that brings a nostalgic smile to old lips. Well done.
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Date: 8/28/2017 3:03:00 PM
ohh,marvelous!... this has a rippling effect on me, ralph... enjoyed it; huggs
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Date: 8/28/2017 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/28/2017 11:32:00 AM
Tank you, Dale: I meant it to be.
Date: 8/27/2017 10:41:00 PM
Hi Julie: Thank you. One good word leads to another.
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