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Ripples In the Water

A life without you like a dawn without dew. Love without you, love not so true. A ripple that grew was the ripple that blew. A ripple so brief a ripple of disbelief a ripple that died hurting our pride. Sit by my side where we cried let things slide and set love aside. I'll show you the moon as lotus flowers bloom in view of my pond where you belong. Hiding beneath a leaf a ripple of belief a ripple so brief but a ripple of relief. We will go to the lake memories will awake we'll sing our song and renew our bond. I'll throw in a pebble a ripple will treble a ripple will ride a ripple will guide. I'll bow in a glide ask you to be my bride. August 29, 2017

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Date: 1/8/2024 7:20:00 AM
Ripples in the water leading to your bride, Very nicely penned Vijay
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Date: 11/14/2022 7:41:00 PM
A poem creating ripples of joy in the reader. As the ripple widens, there are a hundred ripples born with the tossing of a pebble- the question if she will be his bride!
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Date: 8/30/2017 4:34:00 PM
Great job Vijay! Way to mix love and water. I usually have better luck with water but i do enjoy this poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/30/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thanks James..appreciate your feedback!
Date: 8/30/2017 12:09:00 AM
Lovely write ... Many a feeling in many a shape ... Great... Btw, thank you for liking my Ripples in Water ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/30/2017 5:01:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 8/29/2017 11:07:00 AM
Oh, I love this Vijay...a fav for me
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 11:21:00 AM
Thank you, Tim!
Date: 8/29/2017 8:21:00 AM
So many emotions demonstrated in the ripples of love!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 8/29/2017 7:04:00 AM
The continuity of ripples ending in love. Great Write, Vijay. I wish you well in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 7:10:00 AM
So good to see you in this space, Ralph--so happy with your heartfelt comments!
Date: 8/29/2017 6:43:00 AM
This is very well done. ! I think it will well in the contest. I enjoyed this Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for such lovely comments!
Date: 8/29/2017 6:21:00 AM
Nice one, Vijay: ......and it describes the uncertainty of love like ripples on the water. Should place well. SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 6:31:00 AM
Lovely comments--delighted by your visit, Suzanne!

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