Ripples In Space

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Ripples in Space Entwined with universal mind Aligned with pulsations of love Yet what soul seeks, we’re yet to find Void and form not quite hand in glove Will of God and our heart, both one Entwined with universal mind Whilst we shine like the yonder sun Wheel of time we cannot rewind Pulse of oneness, loving and kind Cajoles us to use our power Entwined with universal mind Outpour a benign bliss shower Why then is our soul tremulous Even though no fetters now bind Perhaps ego trace emulous Entwined with universal mind 21-May-2022

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/26/2022 9:45:00 AM

One heart, one mind, one spirit, one breath all bound together in intentional unity stepping together into each minute Seeker. You have penned this "unity," and the questions it raises, so seamless into each stanza. Beautifully done. Thank you for this poetic gift!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/26/2022 7:19:00 PM

The one divided itself, becoming manifest as the many, then each of the many floundered, knowing not they are all one, in timeless time, again entwining with universal mind, in a dance of separation and union.

Miranda Hawley

Date: 5/24/2022 11:26:00 AM

As an example of what you want for a poem called "Unity Conscious" this is out of this world. All I got to say is wow.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/24/2022 7:11:00 PM

Thank you, Miranda. This example is merely indicative, for the contest. Take your musings wherever your soul leads

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/22/2022 11:10:00 AM

a nice one! such unity of thought would make this universe a better place

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/22/2022 5:40:00 PM

Check out Ra Law of One, said to be channelled from a sixth density consciousness as contrasted with humans at third density.