Ripples

no more is she dead…with ripples of her memories ye bring alive



04.02.2023

Poet’s note: A father feels distraught that his daughter left them soon after birth upon not finding him there to hold her in arms, an admiring father. Later, after years he finds one he thinks she’s his daughter. The girl too feels that way. This Monoku summarizes his heart-felt feelings.
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Brul Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Very heart-warming! What gift on a birthday could be more precious than this? I have no words.
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:45 PM
So nice and so true. Congrats
Fowler Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:18 AM
So sweet and tender, with a happy ending. Congratulations on your win! :)
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