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Ripples

child revels throwing a pebble in the calm lake stillness gets disrupted rings of sparkling ripples gleam- in perfect circles expand
Date: 11/20/2020 Submitted for: QUIN-TO Your Five Line Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/30/2021 10:25:00 AM
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Hey, a tanka. I love to see this form and I think you did a really good job with ripples!!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 11/28/2020 12:44:00 PM
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Superb great poetry wow! I still revel in river ripples. Kudos!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/29/2020 7:56:00 AM
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Thank you Zaynab. Yes I too.. it makes me happy. Have a blessed day :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 11/20/2020 6:34:00 PM
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Dear Ani, your gift for poetry gleams in the beauty of this expressive gem. Your lively vivid imagery entices the senses and brings me to the center of this perfect moment. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes and hugs for you, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/21/2020 10:24:00 PM
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Susan thank you so much for these lovely words of yours.. such little simple things inspire us all dear friend.. all poetic mind.. Have a great Sunday. Love n hugs ~ Ani
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2020 5:40:00 AM
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- Love it, Ani :) - Hope it will be a top winning poem for you, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/20/2020 5:55:00 AM
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Anne thank you for your sweet words. Have a wonderful day dear friend. Love n hugs :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 5:13:00 AM
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Lovely imagery and nice choice for this contest... You did the tanka very well..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/20/2020 5:54:00 AM
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Thank you for your encouraging words SO. God bless. Have a great day :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/20/2020 3:41:00 AM
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Yes. Wonderful images. Hope you win. have a great day. Pete.Well done.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/20/2020 4:50:00 AM
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Thank you for the visit and comment Peter. You too have a great day! :)

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