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Waves of time Rip through sands Sands of love Sands of war Sands of birth Sands of death Till the sands Are hollowed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/21/2017 1:52:00 PM
And time stands still. I like how the sands of time have been overtaken by the waves of time and it seems, all have been washed out with the tide. Really nice Trisha.
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Trisha Romano
Date: 4/21/2017 1:56:00 PM
Thank you very much! your feedback is greatly appreciated.

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