Ripple

Waves of time
Rip through sands
Sands of love
Sands of war
Sands of birth
Sands of death
Till the sands
Are hollowed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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April 21, 2017 at 1:52 PM
And time stands still. I like how the sands of time have been overtaken by the waves of time and it seems, all have been washed out with the tide. Really nice Trisha.
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April 21, 2017 at 1:56 PM
Thank you very much! your feedback is greatly appreciated.
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