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  Contest Name ; Rolling With The Rs

  Sponsor's Name ; Nette Onclaud

  Date posted  ; 4th August  2025

 

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                           Trauma,
                       loiters and lurks,
                   terror of scarred recall,
               that primal bug I yearn to squash,
           volcanic magma, spewing ruptured bile, 
               past life nemesis a stern plight,
                  I shudder, weep and pine,
                    at graves filled by,
                         trauma
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Date: 8/25/2025 10:44:00 AM
Emotive done well!
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Howard Kerr
Date: 8/25/2025 11:28:00 AM
Your compliment goes down well, Kim. I’ll take note of your assessment. Howard
Date: 8/10/2025 2:30:00 AM
Scars weave through life’s tapestry, dark threads that twist and turn in myriad shapes, touching the physical body, mind, heart, and soul. Howard, congratulations on the win.
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Date: 8/9/2025 4:50:00 PM
Howard, CONGRATS on your win with this powerful write. Janice
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Howard Kerr
Date: 8/9/2025 6:02:00 PM
I really appreciate that comment and compliment, Janice. Thanks for reading my work and the time involved Howard
Date: 8/9/2025 1:21:00 PM
Nice and emotive one. Belated congrats, Howard
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Date: 8/6/2025 7:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Howard :) - hugs
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Date: 8/5/2025 5:33:00 AM
Traumas can be horrible in life, and they come in so many different forms and can affect our body, mind, emotion and spirit. There must be a contest going on using the Rictameter form because I have seen a large number of poems in this form. Sara k
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Date: 8/5/2025 2:10:00 AM
- When life's experiences are written into the body's history, great described in your Rictameter, Howard - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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