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  Contest Name ; Rolling With The Rs

  Sponsor's Name ; Nette Onclaud

  Date posted  ; 4th August  2025

 

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Trauma, loiters and lurks, terror of scarred recall, that primal bug I yearn to squash, volcanic magma, spewing ruptured bile, past life nemesis a stern plight, I shudder, weep and pine, at graves filled by, trauma

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Date: 8/6/2025 7:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Howard :) - hugs
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Date: 8/5/2025 5:33:00 AM
Traumas can be horrible in life, and they come in so many different forms and can affect our body, mind, emotion and spirit. There must be a contest going on using the Rictameter form because I have seen a large number of poems in this form. Sara k
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Date: 8/5/2025 2:10:00 AM
- When life's experiences are written into the body's history, great described in your Rictameter, Howard - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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