Ripened Glow

Each ripe moment streams on throughgemmed prism--
my being cleansed along  tints
Of polished dawn waking.



For nette onclaud


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:02 AM
Awesome pen amelie! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 6:52 PM
good take Amelia congrats hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Amelie, your entry is so unique and very lovely. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!
Carter Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Your ripened glow is such pretty imagery congrats on your win ~ lee
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 5:07 PM
lovely imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Amelie, congrats on your win. SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 11:01 AM
wow, beautiful imagery!!! Congrats on the win
Sabre Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 2:47 AM
I like the spiritual cleansing. A polished poem!
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