Rip, Rip, Rip Away

Rip it all apart. Rip, rip, RIP away.
Tear the place apart, that’s just what you’d do to me.

See the stars tonight hold their majesty. 
The seas of black behind bright sparks. A mirror to you I see.

Blame the wind and the rain, blame the world for me. Rip it all apart. 

That’s what you’d do to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Arendel Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 2:00 PM
So simple but I can tell there's a lot of emotion in this. Really amazing poem!
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December 8, 2023 at 12:50 AM
Hi Eli, Thanks very much. Merry Christmas.
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