R-I-P- Nadine '06

O Nadine,  
death has momentarily  
revealed its face.  
Thy name shall ne'er go in vain.  
Yea, thou prepareth for a  
journey of splendor and grace.  
O he Lord  
hath laid a destine path for thee  
leading unto a divinely,  
heavenly, serenely kind of place.  
For thou art a  
flawless redest rose and the  
heavens be thy vase.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 9:14 PM
Such a special verse, love that last line that gives life to the rose.
Maverick Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Anthony, i see you have a talent for writing, (you do need to check spelling as we all do) i value expression and emotion 1st of all, however others may mark you down on punctuation/spelling etc, you will benefit by exersizing your capabilties in this direction, have enjoyed your above poem..!will look you up again..
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