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R.I.P Dwayne

Dwayne How stupid could you be you were smoking weed and jumping off cliffs that you didnt know off to your friends you were trying to show when you didnt even know how to swim did you think you would just pretend? and everything would be fine in the end were you thinking at all? i hope i break through some walls because many people here are missing you now you were just 18, still just a teen you didnt even graduate yet and one party for the first day of summer in quaries who's depths outnumbered your deepest depths, took you from all of us you didnt even know my area well enough, being from Whitehall, not Slatington and yet you decided to try and swim, so what, you jumped in? off of a fifty foot wall, into a big 250 foot deep hole you never came up and for quiet some time your friends didnt realize it so now your gone, drowned, because you had to do something not so smart no one will really remember your name, you'll just be the boy from Whitehall that died in our quarrie, that ended the games hearts will break, people will scream, from nightmares that you caused ill miss you, even though i didnt know you at all Dwayne how could you be so stupid R.I.P my unknown friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 11:30:00 AM
So sad, powerful but sad.....another great write, and thank you for your comments -Jessica
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Date: 5/26/2009 12:01:00 PM
Life is an adventure sometimes ... with unexpected endings ... love the searching questionings bringing us back to a moment of responsibility ... bravo.
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Date: 5/26/2009 11:41:00 AM
ITS NICE TO REMEMBER AND PAY TRIBUTE TO PEOPLE ESPECIALLY THE INKNOWN THATS SWEET NICE JOB
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