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Severing the attachment, 
Desperate to liberate myself from self imprisonment,

Each Separation ensuing with agony,
Feeling as my own worst enemy,

Further and further I tear,
Seeking the long sought relief but it becomes to much to bear,

Allowing the mold to feel anew, 
Leaving me in a state of subdue,

Almost craving the need to illustrate  some emotion

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Evrod Samuel September 20, 2012 at 7:11 PM The worst enemy we have is our restless mind......nothing hurts so much than low self esteem .. Ty Price December 12, 2013 at 11:54 PM Well said!

Poet Destroyer A September 20, 2012 at 1:40 PM TY, a very interesting way to describe self imprisonment. i say go with it... express your emotions.. enjoyed...pd Ty Price December 12, 2013 at 11:53 PM Highly appreciated.

Dalila Agtani June 23, 2012 at 1:09 AM I love your last line Ty. Your poem is an illustration of your emotions! Welcome to PS. May you enjoy every verses you share with our wonderful community of poets in soup. Love Dalila Ty Price June 23, 2012 at 1:22 PM thank you Dalila, im glad you enjoyed reading it. :) and so far i have enjoyed my time on here.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2012 at 12:05 PM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ty. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol Ty Price June 17, 2012 at 1:35 AM thank you very much Carol

Juli- Michelle June 13, 2012 at 7:53 AM THIS is your way of illustrating emotion, Ty! don't let the insides rip you apart, rip the frustration out into rhyme and poetry! it helps us all... =Juli-Michelle= Ty Price June 13, 2012 at 6:59 PM Thank you, i recently got into poetry and have been using it for just that. displaying my emotions its been pretty awesome.