R.I.P

At night when your asleep,
When you soul is not awake,
I lust to hear you speak,
So by your bedside I pray,
I stare at you constantly,
With every breath I take,
Talking to god honestly,
Like look what you create,
When she smile I feel invenceble,
Like a knight without a weakness,
Her voice blocks out the sun and leave the moon speachless,
Her eyes make you forget like really who am I?
And the beauty within make looking off feel like suicide,
But she's an angel now,
Her soul inside sway up,
Becaus the night she went to sleep, she never did wake up,
So as long as I'm living,
I will never rest or sleep,
Untill I knw my love for her can surely REST IN PEACE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 13, 2010 at 6:38 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future James. Love, Carol
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July 12, 2010 at 11:34 AM
wow,, deep write... R.I.P. with a new meaning to me,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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July 12, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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