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Rinse - Repeat

a city sleeps
days debris washed away
streetlight showers

John G. Lawless
©6/18/2018

cityrainhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2018 at 9:26 AM

OH nice twist with street light showers. Love that image.

John Lawless

June 24, 2018 at 8:26 AM

just one of the majestic views of city life. Thanks for stopping by Andrea.

Tom Cunningham

June 21, 2018 at 2:58 PM

Love haiku's, great image John, never heard of them until I joined soup.

John Lawless

June 24, 2018 at 8:24 AM

Lucky you!!! They've been haunting me since High School....

Charlie Smith

June 21, 2018 at 11:52 AM

Well done John...

John Lawless

June 24, 2018 at 8:23 AM

Thanks Charlie

Jan Allison

June 21, 2018 at 9:21 AM

A superb haiku, very vivid imagery John:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

June 24, 2018 at 8:22 AM

Thank you Jan. Nature and the city do have their moments

Daniel Turner

June 21, 2018 at 9:05 AM

I get a vivid mental picture, John. well done!

John Lawless

June 24, 2018 at 8:22 AM

Thanks Daniel, capturing a moment in a few lines - the challenge of the haiku

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