shamika smith green Poet Free verse

Rings Of Saturn

Skating upon Saturn's rings 
what a great human being you are
I feel like I am flying 
I feel so good i feel like crying
Look at how these rings shine 
My oh My what a time to be alive 
As i am skating around these rings 
You catch up to me and pull me closely in.
As Saturn begins to glisten
And as the fragments began to ice 
I say to myself what a beautiful sight
As i gaze into the sky 
It looks like pieces of glitter floating by
Skating upon Saturn's rings 
is where the magic happens 
You get lost inside another world away from all the madnesses.

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Beata Agustin February 21, 2025 at 4:05 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. shamika smith green February 21, 2025 at 6:14 AM Thank you so much Beata Augustin I really appreciate the postive feed back