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Rings Of Saturn

Skating upon Saturn's rings what a great human being you are I feel like I am flying I feel so good i feel like crying Look at how these rings shine My oh My what a time to be alive As i am skating around these rings You catch up to me and pull me closely in. As Saturn begins to glisten And as the fragments began to ice I say to myself what a beautiful sight As i gaze into the sky It looks like pieces of glitter floating by Skating upon Saturn's rings is where the magic happens You get lost inside another world away from all the madnesses.

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Date: 2/21/2025 4:05:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2025 6:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Beata Augustin I really appreciate the postive feed back

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