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Ringing In My Ear

see the light your eyes describe, in every shade from joy to grey ...feel the weight your mind inflicts with heartless, selfish life neglect now clear a path with lessons learned and climb your mountain .....left undisturbed to see a world your heart deserves and laugh in weightless gratitude.... for all God's Gifts the world to share ___________________ for Kristin Reynolds contest

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/22/2009 2:09:00 PM

recomment-you re too kind to me my friend--thanks i appreciate it all--charma

Michele Harrison

Date: 6/18/2009 11:15:00 AM

Beautiful!!

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/16/2009 5:35:00 PM

Great poem James, good luck in the contest with this. once again, you comment and I blush...thank you. ~Tru~

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/14/2009 12:42:00 PM

Nice picture, I like the last two lines; mountain climbing reminds me of a movie that I usually saw when I was about age 3 or 4; thanks a lot for the experience =D

Donna Golden

Date: 6/11/2009 2:39:00 PM

"All God's Gifts...the world to share". YES. So much said in one line. This is another great write, James. I am a fan. Donna

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/9/2009 1:44:00 PM

great strong write james best of luck in the contest thanks for the comment

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/9/2009 9:19:00 AM

An inspirational piece of lovliness James. How uplifting your words sing.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/8/2009 4:55:00 PM

A great write that puts the reader on a clear "path" to God's gifts. Very nice work again from a member of the Soup's famous James Gang! Love, Carolyn

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 6/7/2009 11:18:00 AM

great poem James and a strong ending keep up the good work

James Peranteau

Date: 6/7/2009 7:46:00 AM

A write with gusto and beauty ! Great write ! Hopes for ya here ! james

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/4/2009 1:30:00 PM

you have a remarkable talent and you sell the story well i admire your work thanks for the comment

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/4/2009 7:31:00 AM

I pray for you the best in that contest, dear friend ... congratulations on your great win elsewhere ... your talent deserve no less a tribute ... and may you genius long inspire us with the wonderful poems you permit us to read. Thanks for your comments, love always.

Levi Justice

Date: 6/3/2009 11:50:00 PM

Wow! I love this poem. I really like how you say in the first stanza "in every shade from joy to grey." Awesome job, Jim! and thanks for all the encouraging comments on my poetry. Peace, Levi

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/3/2009 8:56:00 PM

Good luck in the contest dear James. This is brilliant poetry of course I expect nothing but, from your talented pen. Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always appreciated.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/2/2009 6:10:00 AM

So beautiful. Reminds me I need to have a talk with myself. Well done and good luck! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/2/2009 5:58:00 AM

This is awesome brother Jim...wonderful writing to self...best wishes in the contest.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/1/2009 3:29:00 PM

All the best in the Contest, Jim, a fountain fresh of a write sparkling with the light of genius. Peace and love

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/1/2009 2:58:00 PM

awesome--'climb your mountain .... left undisturbed to see a world your heart deserves"this is my fav bit,it gives me courage to climb each mountain so then i can live freely in heart and soul,and all the other verses a gem-bravo-goodluck--charma