Ring Full of Daisies

A ring full of daisies weaved in her hair
adorns a white cotton sundress 
as she twirls through the air
a heavenly tune plays only for her
the world's at a standstill
as her dream scenes come true
she's in love with the blue bird
plays tag with the squirrels 
she speaks with the sweet swan
understanding each word
she's a vision of lovely
God's gracing gift
nothing restrains her
a princess adrift
with the sun shining down
through cracks in skies mist
her smile is beaming
at peace with life's twists
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 8:04 AM
As I read this one I imagine Snow White. It has a fairy tale sweetness to it.
Haight Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Very sweet with lovely imagery, Tim. A belated congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor. Sandra
Konos Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:53 AM
And ...I thought you couldn't get any better! Congratulations....
Flower Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Simply beautiful. Congrats!
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Brilliantly sweet, congratulations POTD, well done
Ashe Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Really nice POTD Tim! Yes, written by a man with daughters! Congrats!
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 6:02 PM
I love it. Simple and sweet. Good job, Tim.
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Thank you very much Marilyn, Have a great night.
Sergi Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Beautiful poem and a beautiful woman, Tm
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Thanks Ralph. You are right about the woman : )
Quigley Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Beautiful poem! Congrats on POTD. Your daughter?
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Thanks Tom...I have two beautiful daughters but not about them. I was with them right before I wrote this so their was some happiness inside me from the visit.
Meissner Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Thank You. Wonderful verbal image display.
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Jim for the compliment. I will head over to your page.
Turner Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Tim. Is this your daughter or your woman. Someone's awful happy. Really nice, Tim. Peace my friend:)
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thanks DT...Happy is a good word. Great weekend with the kids will do that.
Allison Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Delightful imagery Tim many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thanks Jan. I wasn't expecting this.
Warrior Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Congrats on POTD Tim...well done my friend...^WW^
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Thank you my warrior friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 6:11 AM
- Really beautiful, Tim - CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Thanks A-L...I am pleasantly surprised
Chircop Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 4:59 PM
How beautiful this is, how romantic such words, a fave.
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thanks Charmaine, Sometimes I do like to write a little romance...have a good night,,,thanks for the fave : )
Devnath  Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Beautiful imagery my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Thank you my good friend BL
Mark Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 4:11 AM
OK ,..guess its down to me ... 23 reads , 2 comments and a title incorrectly spelt but salvagable ' Daisies" .... line 5 has a rogue word, take a pick " at to " dreamy write
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Thanks Ian.
Bear Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:59 PM
This is so sweet. Happy Easter Hugs Edith
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Thank you so much Edith
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