Rimmon Rock

By the city sight, and bright moonlight, we had watched a landing plane.
with my fingers crossed, in the autumn frost, i had hoped youd felt the same
we had slow carressed, and my beating chest, felt as if it were on fire
and I felt so high, looking towards the sky, next to whom i deep desire


	So to rimmon rock
	full of promise talk
	and of holding hands and hearts
	I shall not return
	lest the memory burn
	like your bright eyes in the dark

So we fled the night, to a barroom blight, thick with tension and with booze
and we drank away, with not much to say, letting awkward silence loose
You were locked inside, the place you hide, too afraid to let me in
You want just a friend, and at that it ends, before it could begin.  


	up at Rimmon rock
	i had too much stock
	in the future we might start
	but it's gone away
	and its hard to say
	that i ever touched your heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 30, 2010 at 10:29 AM
can feel the emotions
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November 24, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Justin. Love, Carol
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November 22, 2010 at 11:02 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Justin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 22, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be pleasant and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv and Happy Thanksgiving ...
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