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Rimmon Rock

By the city sight, and bright moonlight, we had watched a landing plane. with my fingers crossed, in the autumn frost, i had hoped youd felt the same we had slow carressed, and my beating chest, felt as if it were on fire and I felt so high, looking towards the sky, next to whom i deep desire So to rimmon rock full of promise talk and of holding hands and hearts I shall not return lest the memory burn like your bright eyes in the dark So we fled the night, to a barroom blight, thick with tension and with booze and we drank away, with not much to say, letting awkward silence loose You were locked inside, the place you hide, too afraid to let me in You want just a friend, and at that it ends, before it could begin. up at Rimmon rock i had too much stock in the future we might start but it's gone away and its hard to say that i ever touched your heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/30/2010 10:29:00 AM
can feel the emotions
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:48:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Justin. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:02:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Justin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:59:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be pleasant and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv and Happy Thanksgiving ...
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