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Right When I Think We'Re Getting Better, We Implode

it's like the petals of flowers are the pins on grenades i pick them one by one are we better are we not one by one until they all drop

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Date: 8/2/2021 10:20:00 PM

I really like this poem. Thank you for writing it.

Date: 11/4/2019 8:14:00 AM

I hope it’s a love bomb! Cute one.

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 11/17/2019 1:44:00 PM

Thank you!!

Date: 11/3/2019 3:36:00 PM

Wow... You say so much in so little words..

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 11/5/2019 6:52:00 PM

Thank you for supporting me. I'm thankful for you <3

Date: 10/31/2019 10:47:00 AM

Hello Brooklyn Cruz You are very creative with this poem. I like it. have a nice day my friend.

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 11/17/2019 1:45:00 PM

Thank you for supporting me, Darlene! I truly appreciate it :)

Date: 10/28/2019 9:18:00 AM

Very well crafted my friend...great analogy Brooklyn...all the best...^WW^ :o)

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 10/28/2019 9:29:00 AM

Thank you!!! I hope you will continue supporting my work :))

Date: 10/27/2019 10:42:00 PM

Powerful poem, Brooklyn.

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 10/28/2019 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Line!!