Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Right Past the Moon

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I sent you a kiss
on the star glistened heavens
Right past the moon
in a hurry it flew

In search of your lips
for I know nothing sweeter
So you will know
I am thinking of you

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Hello There January 6, 2020 at 1:45 PM A beautiful sentiment and a lovely gesture! Love this :) Chris Green January 6, 2020 at 2:11 PM I am happy you do. Thank you HT.

Jennifer Proxenos January 3, 2020 at 11:57 AM So sweet, cute and romantic hope that the receiver, sent you one back! Such beautiful poetry, Blessings, Jennifer. Chris Green January 3, 2020 at 12:38 PM Thank you my friend. I'm still waiting to see... :)

Heidi Sands January 2, 2020 at 7:00 PM Oh, I love that....right past the moon in a hurry it flew. Is that what I saw flying by? So sweet Chris ! :) Chris Green January 3, 2020 at 7:40 AM That could have been it... :) Thank you so very much Heidi

Sandra Adams January 2, 2020 at 6:26 PM sigh....what an exit.... goodnight Chris... Chris Green January 3, 2020 at 7:39 AM Thank you my friend. I'll say good morning now. ;)

Susan Woodrow January 2, 2020 at 5:56 PM lovely! good night :) Chris Green January 3, 2020 at 7:39 AM Thank you Susan. Good night.

Ilene Bauer January 2, 2020 at 5:41 PM love the title and the rest of the poem, too, chris! Chris Green January 3, 2020 at 7:39 AM Thank you so very much Ilene. :)

Gershon Wolf January 2, 2020 at 5:31 PM Sweetness! Glad I didn't take a flyer on this one, Chris! Smiles, Gershon Chris Green January 3, 2020 at 7:38 AM Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate you sitting on my shelf. :)