Right Now

In the exact moment that I am right now I stand in a sea of vulnerability; susceptible to the effects of causes around me and since I am fully aware, I own my surroundings I am one with sounds and vibrations resonating from the earth; I am that pulse of the drum beat thats been thrashing inside me since birth Right now, I am exactly as I am deeply flawed and misjudged used, victimized and persecuted Right now I am you in the absolute Right now, I am exactly as I am balanced, whole and complete attracting abundance and certainty Right now I am peace - still you Right now, I am exactly as I am You

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Lara Adig

Date: 9/21/2016 2:54:00 PM

Hi, my name is Lara Adigun and I'm a student at Bentonville High School. I was wondering if I could recite your poem at a tournament of mine and I would love your permission. Please reply ASAP!

Humble B
Date: 11/12/2017 3:03:00 PM

I haven't logged in here in a while. Please use my poetry anytime. Sorry so late to respond. Much love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/24/2016 8:05:00 PM

humble b, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2015 2:36:00 PM

Humble B, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/29/2014 12:28:00 AM

Nicely done Humble... Verlena

Ur Favorite Poet

Date: 4/5/2014 7:39:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this poem. Soft but strong :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/1/2014 1:47:00 PM

Wow...this is a great write!!!

Edward Orozco

Date: 6/4/2013 8:27:00 AM

very nice, well written- Eddie

Sean L Sanders

Date: 6/4/2013 5:13:00 AM

Wow! Keep going I'm listenning! Excellent poetry poet!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/1/2013 5:33:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your write this evening. Light & Love

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/30/2013 7:42:00 PM

A very thought provoking poem here! Loved it! Always, Laura

Naldeem Bout

Date: 1/21/2013 3:28:00 AM

hey humble B, I applaud you on such fine work. thank you for your comment on my poem too, since I am new on P.soup its a great comfort to know that you took the time to read my work. especailly since you have such a natural talent yourself. have a wonderful humble B ;)