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Riffing Thoughts

lone crimson leaf
whisked away
on day's breath
floating endlessly

my mind 
in thoughts
drifts wayward
on a breeze
as i land
artistically 
in your arms
through dreams

Copyright © Sandra Adams | Year Posted 2019

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Line Gauthier Date: 10/15/2019 9:44:00 PM Beautiful, Sandra. Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 10/15/2019 8:30:00 AM Ah, those fickle winds of fate...and folly. Nicely done Sandra Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/15/2019 9:41:00 AM Thank you so much John...this was one of those middle of the night musing thoughts... :) hugs

Hello There Date: 10/14/2019 10:22:00 PM Nice to have a safe place to land :) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/15/2019 9:39:00 AM Thank you my friend...we can land anywhere we want to land in dreams...hugs

Robert Lindley Date: 10/14/2019 1:48:00 PM Windblown thoughts and imagery gifted by Mother Nature- you poetic pen captured both splendidly my friend. As if a dedicated artist painted the words with the brush of a master .. A fav-- a gleaming gem of soothing sights too.. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2019 4:26:00 PM Well thank you so much Robert, for your kind comment and the honor of a favorite... :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/14/2019 11:54:00 AM Lovely poem Sandy..tender and romantic! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2019 4:26:00 PM Thank you so much Vijay...sometimes my muse goes soft on me :) hugs

Heidi Sands Date: 10/14/2019 11:43:00 AM Beautifully written Sandra :) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2019 4:25:00 PM Thank you so much Heidi :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/14/2019 11:15:00 AM OUtstanding itty bitty poem. Shadowpoetry used to have an annual itty bitty poem contest. I was one of the judges of it. this would have flown right up to the top of my list if I'd seen one like this. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2019 4:25:00 PM wow, thank you for such a kind comment Andrea...this one came to me during the wee hours of a restless night... hugs :)

Quoth Theraven Date: 10/14/2019 10:14:00 AM Sandra, I like this Free Verse in crimson, 'riffing thoughts'. Frustrating when I lay down my head and it fills with poetic lines, only to be gone when awakened by the dawn. -Richard Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2019 10:20:00 AM Thank you Richard...at least they came back...i know how you feel though, lost many that way because sleep was more important :) hugs

Bobby May Date: 10/14/2019 10:09:00 AM Awesome Sandra well done my friend Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2019 10:10:00 AM Thank you Bobby :) hugs

Chris Green Date: 10/14/2019 9:46:00 AM Absolutely beautiful. That is what I would call a wonderful dream. Though, your poetry is always so dream-like to me. I often close my eyes after reading and picture the scene the poem creates. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2019 9:56:00 AM thank you my friend, what a beautiful thing to say...this one actually came to me in the middle of the night, but i was not getting up to pen it, it did come back when i was out and saw a red leaf floating down...perhaps not identical words, but the poem still fell... hugs :)