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Riding On the Wind

Riding on the Wind
I share with you a memory of an autumn afternoon;
unloading weekends shopping; such a normal task to do.
Then something moving on my left and this is what I saw;
a whirlwind holding steady, just less than six feet tall.
A spectacle of dust and leaves demanding my attention;
the feeling washing over me; a loving warm sensation.
Without pause, nonchalant; I wasn't in dismay.
Aloud, I spoke, "Hello Uncle George, how are you today?"
Then almost as if walking, gently swaying left and right;
I'd missed him but now he'd appeared, much to my delight.
Approaching just within arms reach, and steady there once more;
I smiled at him. This was no doubt the Uncle I adored.
As whispered breeze he touched my face, oh so tenderly.
I can't explain, but I could feel him smiling back at me.
For several seconds we conversed; hearts speaking to each other;
He'll meet me there on Jordan's shore, when my time to cross over.
So generous of heaven, for its' angels there to lend.
A favored uncle's precious soul........... Riding on the wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/10/2014 9:19:00 PM
Boy, this just speaks to the heart. Loved when he entered the picture. Made me smile. Peace. :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/10/2014 9:27:00 PM
THank you, Robert.. The whole experience made me smile.. It was awesome.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/28/2014 9:36:00 AM
A pleasure to discover and read this fine offering this Sat, morn. Lost my father in '69 and many times I actually felt his hand on my shoulder when I was in great distress and could hear a voice say, this too shall pass!!! The Universe has many marvels and wonderful things.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 9:51:00 AM
Robert, I truly appreciate your words here. So glad you enjoyed it and shared your story. I agree about the universe. Even in the bible is said we can Noe understand his mysteries... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/26/2014 8:27:00 PM
Aww a treasure of a moment, thank u for sharing and grats on your win. :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/27/2014 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, Casarah.. Always happy to see your sweet comments.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/26/2014 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the win,I loved the last two lines.Well done
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/27/2014 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and the nice comments, Greg. I will read from your list very soon.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/26/2014 9:03:00 AM
What a sweet memory it is ... Heartfelt write..:) kudos!!!, olive eloisa GBU
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/26/2014 12:47:00 PM
Thank you, Olive.. I appreciate your sweet comments.. Huggs.. Arlene
Date: 6/26/2014 7:52:00 AM
Arlene, this is lovely and touching. Thank you for sharing! It is a deserving winner! Congratulations. // paul
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/26/2014 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul.. Always love to hear your kind words.. Huggs.. Arlene
Date: 6/26/2014 7:07:00 AM
Hi Arlene, I love this beautiful, inspirational write dedicated to your uncle. It is just so moving. Congratulations, my friend, on your superb win!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/26/2014 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping with such encouraging words, Pandita.. Huggs.. Arlene
Date: 6/26/2014 1:30:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/26/2014 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Mehta.. I shall enjoy reading from your list with my morning coffee.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/25/2014 11:34:00 PM
Hello Arlene, , Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:58:00 AM
Wow, Arlene. It is surly a blessing to experience such a wonderful event. you put it into words so eloquently. It's also a blessing to be able to share it with others. You have given us something rare. Thank you.... Robert.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/16/2014 8:19:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. Ye, it did bless my heart to experience.. Always nice to hear encouraging words from you.. Hugs.. Arlene..

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