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Riding On Sunset Waves

I write upon the waves of sunsets spectacle All supreme in her dipping miracle One day gone are we even aware Lost in our own day dream To bid farewell and say our unspoken goodbyes To the creators painted canvas highs. Ripples of light pause reflecting the dipping day Colorful blessings that come bright and gay Night and day now hold each other Daylight eyelids heavy The night time waves goodbye to the glorious sun Unspoken eyes lift, crimson orange done. Dancing waves of the twilights smooth silken blanket She takes off all her glittering trinkets Sudden dip on the horizon Her lights out, moon rising The twilight our teacher we watch and learn her gleam We often forget to grasp the larger scheme. 29.1.2021 I write upon waves.

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Date: 1/30/2021 1:54:00 AM
So beautiful Carol!! You take us to a new sphere of the beauty that only nature can give...More to come.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/30/2021 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much JCB....Nature is indeed amazing :))
Date: 1/29/2021 1:31:00 PM
Lovely colourful piece Carol, showing nice imagery and fine rhyme too. Blessings, Gordon
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/29/2021 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Gordon....much appreciated.
Date: 1/29/2021 5:25:00 AM
- I love the colors that the sun makes in the morning and evening ... I have a fantastic view to the sea where the sun goes down ... it's just as beautiful every time ... I'm listening to the waves ... - A beautiful poem, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:34:00 AM
I do too...though I am not as lucky and blessed as you dear Anne-Lise....hugs back :))

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