Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Riding On Fear and Hope

Skiing down the slope at twilight  
Riding 'pon fear and hope
To avoid the avalanche's spill
Aurora's colors scope

Twilight's green flashes etched across
Night's dark sky in suspense
Loose white, soft, fluffy snow powder
Fear_muscles tense, sounds sense

A twilight adventure exposed
This evening's soft aura
Once in a lifetime adventure
Avalanche and aurora

Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Contest:Aurora And Avalanche
Written:March 04, 2015

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Skat A April 30, 2015 at 7:47 PM Sara, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 2:51 PM Sara, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA

Sandra Haight April 27, 2015 at 9:01 PM Very lovely images here, Sara. I enjoyed reading your poem, and congratulate you on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper April 27, 2015 at 2:22 PM Very beautiful as always Sara , a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Debbie Guzzi April 27, 2015 at 11:53 AM Very original way to go Sara! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Monterey Sirak March 7, 2015 at 7:48 AM Your words paint a beautiful picture. I love the image of the night waiting in suspense as the skier races the snow.

Ralph Sergi March 5, 2015 at 10:56 AM Hi Sara: beautiful descriptive poetry and imagery. SOUNDS LIKE A WINNER!

Lindsay Laurie March 4, 2015 at 8:50 PM G'day Sara... Paints a nice picture with words Sara to highlight what I believe are the beauty of the Northern Lights contrasting the snow. Correct me if I'm wrong. Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2015 at 6:21 PM hey, were these pictures here before?? If so, I should have said how cool they are!!

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2015 at 4:02 PM way to go. this one was too daunting for me but you did it well, Sara.

Jan Allison March 4, 2015 at 3:55 PM such beautiful imagery Sara:-) Good luck in the contest:-)