Riding Lessons

bay mare stretches neck
  to gorge on vergeside grass -
  ignoring novice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 4:31 PM
I love the picture this conjures. Did you grow up on a farm or maybe a ranch with horses?
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Reminds me of a 1945 hit song by the Merry Macs titled "Mairzy Doats".
Dome Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 5:34 AM
A clever little write. love your work. well done.best wishes. Pete.
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