Riding a Unicorn

A virginal ride

Holding the mane of a myth

Through fantasy clouds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 9:39 PM
7 I love Unicorns , I love your poem <3 Congratulations on your win
May Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Congrats on a great win Barbara
Gorelick Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Thank you..glad you stopped by..Hope all is well with you. Barbara
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 7:32 PM
she does love those unicorns and I love this poem!! Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Love your allegory about what dreams are made of, Barbara. Perfect! Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, I had forgotten all about this poem. Glad you stopped by.
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your Number 1 win, dear Barbara !!!
Gorelick Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 12:37 PM
thank you Carrie..how are you and how are things in Redding? BG
Schumacker Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Hi Barbara, Nice comprehensive and complete Haiku. Well done. Nice win. Have a great day. Earl
A. Sharma Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Congrats on superb win Barbara!
A  Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:51 PM
OI! I Guess! Barbara, CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~
A  Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:51 PM
EPIC
A. Sharma Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Thats a lovely senryu Barbara! Mane of a myth,, wow great thoughts !!
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:26 AM
stunning senryu:-) i especially love 'Holding the mane of a myth':-) Hugs Jan xx
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