Riders Beneath the Dying Wheel

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Written: August 27, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori ********* They showed without trumpets, but with teeth— Four shadows galloping through the marrow of time. One wore famine such as a crown, another cloaked in fire’s deceit. The third preached war in the brother’s tongue, and the fourth laughed as the stars forgot their names. The wheel spun— not to teach, but to tremble, Dharma cracked beneath the weight of poisoned promises We raised shrines from the threads of logic, We offered them our views and named it veridically raw. Yet in some distant spot, A silver surfer glides through  the endless expanse carrying no blade, Just a memory— a soft whisper  of who we once were, Here the shadows fell laid claim to our light.
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Date: 8/28/2025 2:15:00 AM
Could be a reference to the book of Revelations. It's a book I cannot really understand. But your poem gives a glimpse of the future. Best for a win.
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Date: 8/27/2025 6:15:00 PM
in french we call them " les quatre cavaliers de l'apocalypse" no one can resist, thanks for the extraordinary imagery, enjoyed
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Date: 8/27/2025 5:38:00 PM
Stunning and engaging poem....I always appreciate your unique voice and unique take on contests. You offer a depth that is uncommon but beautiful!
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Date: 8/27/2025 11:40:00 AM
This is a lovely, deep verse. The innocent surfer riding the waves of turmoil seems to sum up a horizon of victory.
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