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Ride With Me!!

I told you from the start, it’s true, “My roller coaster, see it through! Ride with me ‘til journey’s end, Hand in hand, our spirits blend.” “Get off with me,” I gently pled, “No fear, no doubt, no words unsaid. And you will see, in time’s own way, A grateful heart, a brighter day.” “Thankful you stayed, through every turn, The highs, the lows, the lessons learned. Hand in hand, we’ll face the light, A bond forged strong, and shining bright.”

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Date: 4/11/2025 9:09:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/8/2025 1:43:00 PM
What a great metaphor and impressive poem. Please read poems so you will be read - that's how it works on Soup, and that's all I'll say 'bout that. Shine your light, because poetry-lit you are. There's always room for all of our pens to improve, but you are in the 'there' zone. I will read more of your work when time permits. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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