Ride Away

Waves of breeze, flow through trees like the sea Shadows map pavement, below my ride Sunbursts of warm rays are reaching out to me My mind clears nicely, from all I tried I ride through beautiful scenery Shadows map pavement, below my ride The land I pass, wrapped in greenery With cool air softly touching my face I ride through beautiful scenery I leave worries behind to erase Around each corner, freedom is there With cool air softly touching my face There seems to be nothing to compare Movement flowing with a merging smile Around each corner, freedom is there Refreshing me with each passing mile Waves of breeze flow through trees like the sea I ride away with time for a while Sunbursts of warm rays are reaching out to me Heidi Sands 7/19/18

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/20/2018 11:59:00 AM

Beautiful terzanelle, Heidi! Exhilarating lines ... Movement flowing with a merging smile Around each corner, freedom is there. Aurora bright poetry. Love and hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/20/2018 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Freddie! I hope all is well :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/20/2018 9:39:00 AM

Heidi, your words touch the reader as a "wave of breeze" in graceful beauty XXOO

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/20/2018 9:48:00 AM

That is nice to hear. Thank you so much Mike ! XXOO

Joseph May

Date: 7/19/2018 6:04:00 PM

Feeling the wind on your face as you zoom neath the sky...Lovely Terzanelle Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/19/2018 6:07:00 PM

Exactly, Joseph. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/19/2018 4:59:00 PM

Your poem flows so beautifully in this lyrical form, Heidi..and the imagery you captured is wonderful indeed!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/19/2018 5:13:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I appreciate the positive feedback! I hope you are having a nice day :)