Yanny Widjanarko Poet Free verse

Riddles of Mom's Affections

Am I just too blind?
For not seing the good intension of you?

Am I just too deaf?
For not hearing any good reason from you?

Am I just too numb?
For not sensing all the love that you shed?

I thought I just too dead to live within your world

No more words capable to solve
Enough fed by your conflicts and dramas
Understanding you cost the rest of my life
Or I cost the rest of my life to understand the love of you

We never really speak
We puzzled in our own existences 
Knowing you is like walking in the dusty haze
Knowing me is like climbing on a thousand feet of sturdy wall

Talking about us 
Talking about spot that never been fully
We lacked in our bond
But still... This is the undeniable life

From you I stand this day
Wether I should regret or be thanked
There will be no me without you
There will be no us beyond you

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Karen Anglesey April 14, 2013 at 10:45 AM Stunning vision of this relationship. Exceptional writing. Yanny Widjanarko April 14, 2013 at 5:57 PM Thank you Karen :D I think in the end of the stanza explained that this relationship is unbreakable after all :) glad to have a comment by you Karen :D wishing you a lovely day :) hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2013 at 11:19 PM Good morning Yanny see comment below. I hope you are greeted with a spectacular day and weekend. Yanny Widjanarko April 12, 2013 at 11:41 PM Hello Rick :D wishing you a spectacular one too :D hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2013 at 9:33 AM This is profound. I am sure many can relate to these sentiments. Well done Yanny. Yanny Widjanarko April 12, 2013 at 11:40 PM Thank you Rick, at that time I just remember 1 thing from my past about I was arguing about my mom's opinion which at the end i knew she was totally right about it, more or less our relationship quite complicated but basically we are needing one each other :)

Lucilla Carrillo April 12, 2013 at 6:30 AM Yanny; I agree with you. This is very true.Many blessings for you this day.....Lucilla Yanny Widjanarko April 12, 2013 at 11:35 PM Thank you Luci glad to see you stopped by :D wishing you a wonderful weekend :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2013 at 11:42 AM - A sad poem Yanny .... a bad mother and daughter relationship, it must feel like a wound in the heart for both of you - I hope that it is just "fantasy" - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko April 12, 2013 at 11:36 PM Agree with that Rick :D Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2013 at 11:18 PM Everyone behaves based on the expriances they have lived. Only through new experiences can they be changed. You have a spirit of grace so I am sure your relationship will be blessed. All require forgiveness including ourselves. Yanny Widjanarko April 11, 2013 at 7:58 PM Sometimes a complicated situations brings them to a bad relationship at the end Yanny Widjanarko April 11, 2013 at 7:57 PM Actually, this is a common thing these days the relationship between mother and her child, sometimes we as the child never understand the way they handle us and the way they tried to make us understand what she thinks about what's the best for us, and also same from the child side which is don't understand the way their parents want the best for them