Riddle-Fiddle-Diddle

-A    NOTE-             
***DO NOT ATTEMPT TO*** 
***FIGURE THIS OUT*******
***JUST SAY HELLO : - )****
 ***or  WHAT is this??? ***

((RIDDLES-FIDDLES-DIDDLES ))

My towel is constructed of silk
That did not make sense at all
I drink bitter sour milk
Once again no sense at all

A busted line  -  A stronghold
Confusing as we speak?
A thief breaks and left gold instead 
Leaving my world incomplete ???

In my dream he cut my head
puzzled ???
My dreams in a flowerbed
I'm still puzzled ???

White winter shelter when it comes to snow
a riddle, a riddle of black snow
Black as the night covered by coal
Wonder if I said good night?

I walk and I have no feet
I speak and I have no mouth
Why is it impossible? 

a breathing exercise,
misunderstood 
the stick walking is bent

My boat is flipped upside right of everything 
The grave is empty with dirt and debris 
I've lost my mind completely 

((Last but not least))

The  grandmother is tall
The mother came short
The father is darker than most 
Some white child of sort
Why the Mexican???


BY: P.D.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nance Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Wow, I haven't even started drinking yet and i am all tripped out reading this! Very cleverly confusing and fun to read. but as per direction... I'm here saying HI :) sending you smiles sweet lady x
Callus Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on having this poem featured here this week, Linda! Though against your wish, I have attempted to make some sense out of these 'flashes' of poetry, and I can assure you that I did not fail! Shows that life is not wholly made up of what we normally expect...surprises are waiting in the shadows. hugs // paul
Austin Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Oh, this is maddening! And I do these sort of poems myself. I just write the first thing comes into my head. Everything makes sense in a strange way. You are strange. I love you. daver
Arnone Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 10:06 PM
"I have no mouth and I must scream." - Harlan Ellison
Day Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Great that this a featured poem this week - too cute! - Jesse
Nehls Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 3:22 AM
Well as unusual as this may seem, it makes perfect sense to me, Linda. Musings of the wandering mind is an exercise that I use from time to time in order to see if something profound may occur. Looks as if you may have stumbled on a few, my dear. Have a beautiful day.... Robert.
Davis Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 10:13 PM
PD Did you take crazy pills before writing this. LOL Or were a bad girl and doing some drunk poem writing. HEE HEE Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Hateful Hearts poem. Hugs
Seal Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 8:28 PM
All quite understandable to a like mind I would guess, probably one in some sort of asylum lol. So your keeping him dangling on a string are yer, that man of yours. Methinks you like toying with men lol. Take care my Sweet Dark Friend, Richard
Maverick Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Hey you must be the ( Tex Mex ) I've heard so much about.." for a while there I thought there were more than one of e'm.. now I see theres a whole one of a lot)) "now thats really hot!!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 11:37 PM
Here is an oldie i already saw too. I just can' t find an oldie I have not seen! Anyway, did you know at the top of this one you had put: just stop and say hi, don't even try to figure this one out. So I am saying HI!!! and nice to see you, Irma.
Brumley Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Well if you're not from Mexico, then you're obviously not a Mexican! See, I do read your work!
Ajith Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 1:03 AM
confusing with smile on face.nice work.
A  Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:10 AM
WHo IS JoHN R. WHAT A CHARMER. GoT 2 GET ME oNE oF THEM. ENJoYABLE EVERY TIME I CoME BACK 2 THIS. (S.M.)
Keys Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 6:39 PM
I figured this out. Once upon a time a waffle and a pancake went out on a date. Both decide that their love(in the form of syrup) was so sweet and consuming that they started to talk of deep love and butter. Ended up consuming each other in passionate luv. And the coffee helped digest their never ending passion. How's that?
Sweetheart Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Well if u keep up with the national news..our American dollar is dead in the markets ..very weak at best.. and what we used to get for a dollar is no more.. bang..meaning bargains.. for one dollar those days long gone... got it? just had to enter..its a contest u know.. and as many may think I was NOT complaining about the last Limerick contest ..just wanted a point of view from a fresh pair of eyes and it was completely taken out of context... from certain nameless people. "Sweetheart" luv all
Parrish-Spence Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 10:31 PM
This is so interesting and good brain vibrations.
Freeman Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Youwere right. Thanks for your comment today. Agape, Moses
Keogh Jr. Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 10:24 AM
P.D> I liked this as it was disjointed, but berserk with a purpose. I could see the Riddler delivering this after having been slugged by the Batman. It has intermittent flashes f coherence, then random insanity, which if you weren't aiming for, you achieved anyway. I enjoyed it. Sorry about the censorship trouble. I have codes myself, but in the spirit of Art and capitalism, let the majority and the market decide. Johhny Depp is the upcoming Riddler?! Wow! Regards, Gerard.
A  Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:54 AM
SUAVE, MEXICAN. WRU- GTC-L.) THIS IS 2 FUNNY. I LIKE,LUV YA.-SKAT
Bruns Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 8:29 PM
That was good for a few laughs... Seems like it was just a random poem that didn't want to make any sense. ^.^
Kapoor Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 7:10 PM
A brilliant piece of non sensible write relieving the readers from sad and heavy readings to keep laughing with you from beginning to end. Love it my friend. And many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.....Poet D
A  Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 4:32 PM
SIDDY, THIS IS BEYOND REALITY. I GOT 2 LAUGH WITH EVERYONE ON THIS. ROYAL U R 2 CUTE. ALONG WITH EVERY COMMENT ON THIS. Love ya L.) skat
Trevino Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 4:17 PM
lol "thieves break and leave me gold???" that line cracked me up, cause when they break in the usual thing to do is take your gold not leave you gold hahaX), love this non sensable write lol,, love it, =(^.^)=Royal
Semeniuk Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 3:11 PM
so many twists and turns...niice write!
Knop Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Well written poem with fantasy, P.D.! Enjoyed reading it this afternoon and thank you for your kind comments...Have a great Sunday...Gert
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