Delysia Hendricks Poet Rhyme

Rich-Heart

For Richard Lamoureux's "Any line" contest.  


Richard Seale-d Door's line:  slammed shut are the doors in "A mind made up".


You told me before
slammed shut are the doors
when my love for you went astray
I got my comeuppance
he's worth not a tuppence
and rumor has it he's gay

Lest I've need of another  
visit to me brother
sometime for a quick howdy-do
or longing for discourse
in code as of Morse
on the stealth oiled a hinge, p'haps two

Ah, found me a crack
Leech-a is back 
my love for the other's dissipated 
you smile goodly, warmly
longingly, lovingly
my return welcome and anticipated 

Delysia Hendricks

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Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2013 at 10:28 PM Just passing thru and thought I'd say hello!!

Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2013 at 10:47 PM Rereading this one. It sure does have some funny lines in it!!!

Richard D Seal September 27, 2013 at 6:56 PM Hey, congratulations, so pleased to see this in winners list, RICHly deserved lol. Glad to be of assistance haha. Take care, Richard and thank you

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2013 at 1:13 AM How nice to see this one finally. And you won with it. BIG congrats for your well deserved win. It was fun seeing the line you decided to emulate.

Skat A September 18, 2013 at 2:11 PM Delysia.......this is a lovely win..... luv ~SKAT~

Tim Ryerson September 17, 2013 at 6:03 PM I'm certainly not gay I'll have you know!...Hilarious as is your usual and if this don't place first I'm gonna file a protest...Not sure who TO yet but I will file nonetheless - Tim

Karen Anglesey September 15, 2013 at 5:14 PM Great poem inspired by a line from another poet. Lovely and very matter of fact ...congratulations on your win :)

Mustapha Mohammed September 15, 2013 at 1:21 PM Beautifully done Delysia. I like it my friend.

Jack Ellison September 15, 2013 at 8:31 AM I believe I owe you a congratulatory note... this be it! Congrats dear Delysia! Love and hugs, Jack xoxoxox

Richard Lamoureux September 14, 2013 at 4:18 PM dropping by to say hello.

Donna Jones September 14, 2013 at 12:47 PM Loved it again....congratulations!!!! And love your pic....

Sandra Adams September 14, 2013 at 7:30 AM nicely penned...congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 8:29 PM Hi Sweet Delysia, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

Lucilla Carrillo September 13, 2013 at 1:35 PM This is really good and great for the contest. Thanks for sharing.... lucilla

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 13, 2013 at 10:40 AM Congratulations on your winning place Delysia xx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2013 at 8:57 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Delysia

Richard Lamoureux September 13, 2013 at 8:46 AM This one made me smile. Thanks for entering my contest.

Donna Jones September 12, 2013 at 9:23 PM Outstanding !!

Dan Kearley September 12, 2013 at 8:49 PM Hey-hey! Look who's back! So happy to see you again. So nice of you to stop by. :o)

Lucilla Carrillo September 8, 2013 at 10:55 AM Girl; This is good. I love it and it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing. ...Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux September 7, 2013 at 3:35 PM :0) Thanks for supporting my contest!

Poet Destroyer A September 7, 2013 at 3:33 PM Hello Delysia, For some reason the first visuals that came to my mind were of a bad relationship. An excellent piece to go with Richard's line. I can't seem to stop reading your poem. I honestly read it 3 times. Made a lot of sense out of something you picked from one fine line. awesome, and thanks so much for being the lovely poet you are... Good Luck In the contest... Linda

Richard D Seal September 7, 2013 at 2:39 PM Hi Sis, I am honoured you've chosen one of my lines for this contest.You did tell me you'd steal one sooner or later lol. You should have taken my advice. Yes, I told you before, To slam that door, And tell him to be on his way, He was no good for you, See my words were true, Likes your parting shot, rumour he’s gay. Good luck in the contest Licia. Take care, Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2013 at 1:11 PM - Oh ... very good poem, Delysia !!!!! - Luck in contest ! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 1:06 PM Hey you....the poem is AMAZING...Girl, you got to brush up on your Morse Code cause I read you like a book! Yea...my insight is KEEN! So, Mr Seal is the inspiration behind this write...He is inspiring! I'm sure he will be flattered no end...Thanks for all the visits. I'll forgive yo for going MIA... Your posts were stupendous.....thanks!