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Constance La France

Sometimes, a mismatch leads to a happy life missed
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We crossed the illusion of marriage hand in hand
To his father’s tune and marching band
He opened the doors and curtains to our life
And was beaming proud of his son and wife
The dad presented and gifted our beloved  trail
With riches that go beyond the grandest scale
Yet, with all the dad's helping hand and sincerity 
Our marriage was two faced with disparity 
Why was there a facade with all his prosperity
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Miller Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 8:03 AM
Strong message, great poem, congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 12:44 PM
Wow, great exploration of the perfect life with a white picket fence. No one can but a couple love. The work they must do is theirs alone and truly not everyone lives happily ever after. Well done! Congrats!
Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations Connie! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 11:45 AM
- A thoughtful poem Connie, congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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