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*Amos 2:11

Richard the Third Poetry Contest

Richard the Third

All hope lost in his hunchback.
All hope lost for love.
All love conveyed as mercy.
All mercy a convenient lie.

Attack! Attack!
“Don’t worry, dear Anne,
I have your back.
I pity you!
You’ve lost your husband
and your father.”

“Marry me! I will take care of you.”
He lusts! He must
have her for his wife.
She’s smart; he smarts
from a reddened face.

He wants all her beauty to himself.
What lies! She could have killed him
with his sword. More swords
are stabbing in intrigues, in shadows,
in towers, no mistake.

Did not Cain begin this tale
of brother against brother!
Did not Cain’s blood-jealousy
crown king after king?

Chilling, still more childish,
in the hands of the devil himself,
the innocent. Henchmen
tower over the young princes,
to do the devil’s work.

Die! Death, destruction and lies
belong to the prince of darkness.
He couldn’t, dared not
even look into their eyes.

More eyes’ closed upon a platter;
the splatter of a royal-red robe;
behold its Belial train.

Meanwhile Anne despairs
of such a horrid cradle that held
horrors for her beloved boys.

For three crimes, even four -
using the sword on a brother,
life with no compassion,
incessant rage* - what more
does the merciful and just Lord
need to see? The house will fall.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 3:39 PM
powerful words that captued the essence of the evil that was Richard III
Wolf Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 8:31 PM
Wish I knew enough to comment intelligently. Seems like a fine write. ~ gw
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 8:35 PM
At least you have enough intelligence to respond. LOL.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Hind Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 6:18 PM
You made some really good points. I read a few things about Anne and Richard III so I could better understand. "That house will always fall"- poignant work, dear Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 12:22 PM
Yours does indeed support Shakespeare's take on that king. I think Robert will like your poem because he wanted us to write on the King Richard from the play. I found it really interesting comparing historical facts with the play!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 1:23 PM
You did the contrast justice, Andrea! Thank you!
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