Rice In the Ocean

I dreamt that I went swimming, 
Into the deep blue sea 
And from nowhere appeared a mermaid, 
That had swum right next to me
The next thing I remembered, 
She had pulled me underneath,
Into a cave, where it was dark, 
Well below the coral reef
She had opened up my vest, 
And she dropped a pearl inside 
And then she said, "Hop on my tail... 
You're going for a ride."
She had taken me to a shipwreck, 
On the ocean's floor
And she wanted me to go with her, 
As she pointed to a door 
So, then we swam inside the door, 
And she guided me to some jewels 
That long ago, were thrown overboard, 
By some drunken pirate fools 
She then pointed to the pearl, 
That she had stuck inside my vest
And wanted me to take it out, 
And return it with the rest
As soon as I returned the pearl,
The mermaid lost her tail 
Then just like that, she walked the aisle with me, 
And she was wearing a white veil
The next night when I had fallen asleep, 
I was as happy as can be
Because I dreamt about that mermaid; again 
And this time...she had married "Me"
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Kingston Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 2:32 PM
This poem made me want a hug. Mermaids are so imaginative, romantic and mysterious in your poem. Your mermaid so filled with kindness. Lovely poem. I just enjoyed it so much, it paints such a beautiful picture. You're so lucky to have each other. Sweet dreams.
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October 17, 2024 at 4:13 PM
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November 15, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in this special contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 1:19 AM
Lovely tale. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Awwn this is so beautiful! My oceanic heart beams as i read this poetic story. Always love a mermaid tale and that ending is gorgeous. Dreams do come true and blessed are the ones that get to walk down the aisle with the ones that place a pearl in their soul.pleasure reading this, Sending you light alwaysss
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