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Ribbon Motif

My meditating, closed eyes seek guidance in ribbon motif. Exquisite, purposeful box, glossy-silk embossed, appears in light. Prayerfully tossed cares fill its depth. A soothing lid, peacefully slid, adheres. Ribbons in rapture dance, pleat, weave - bundling box upwards towards lowering hands … loving, revered hands. March 28, 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2019 10:18:00 PM

This reads like an answered prayer CayCay and I think you are in a perfect place of acceptance and love. Easter blessings, Connie xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/1/2019 12:22:00 PM

CayCay you belong and should aspire to much greater heights - your poetry rules my friend - congratulations poetry hugs - Jenny

Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/1/2019 6:24:00 PM

Tell me where those heights are! Do they include financial prosperity for writers? I'm messing with you, you adorable lady who left me such an uplifting comment. Thank you, Sweetie - I cherish your visits. Love ... CayCay

Eve Roper

Date: 4/1/2019 1:41:00 AM

Back with congratulations

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/31/2019 6:11:00 AM

This poem wrapped me up in her beauty, and has rendered me speechless. Without a voice at all, I am whispering "I am spellbound," CayCay.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/1/2019 6:25:00 PM

You left me such rewarding, embraceable and uplifting comments on this poem, Caren. I thank you, thank you and hug you! and, another hug ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2019 8:26:00 PM

So beautiful, Caycay. makes mine seem very ordinary!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/28/2019 10:06:00 AM

Dreamy world revealed to a heart that seeks enlightenment! Beautifully written dear, CayCay!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2019 9:28:00 AM

You have to watch those beautiful ribbons curiosity killed the cat :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/28/2019 8:31:00 AM

A peaceful view in your meditating eyes..a purposeful box, prayerful cares, ribbons in rapture..kudos for your imagination CayCay..a soothing, revered ending.