Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Sonnet

Rib Festival In Paisley

Every summer in  Paisley Ontario
On a huge grassy park field
A festival is held every summer
 Constants set up their gear
Then begin to cook the ribs
After cooked add their secret
Visitors are given special cards
They have to rate the ribs eaten
People go from booth to booth
Tasting all the different ribs
Then at the end of the day
The ballets are counted
The winner wins a prize
It is dining out to eat
The prize is for two and
  a movie

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Freddie Vassallo September 3, 2018 at 7:43 AM The subject is good, the form is wrong, it is not a sonnet. It is a free verse poem. To call this poem a Sonnet is a sin. Why no punctuation at all and no spaces and the ending. I repeat again is is a well-written poem. I cannot understand when the forms of poems are there to check and learn. I am sorry but the truth hurts. Darlene De Beaulieu September 3, 2018 at 3:08 PM I can not get you on Soup Mail to talk to you. I have tried. Your name is not on the list. I sometimes have trouble knowing the differences of different poetry form. I try hard to get it right. I alwasy do my best. Darlene De Beaulieu September 3, 2018 at 3:00 PM Hello Freddie Vassallo,thank you for telling me about my poem.I now know it is a Free Verse.No I am not upset about your comment. I now know that this verse ia Free Verse.Have a nice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser August 7, 2018 at 2:45 PM I'm vegetarian, lacto, ovo, peska; still it sounds like fun. Darlene De Beaulieu August 7, 2018 at 7:43 PM Hello M.L. Kiser, A ribfest is a lot of fun. Ribs ate made differently, so it makes the contest interesting. Have a nice evening my friend.

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2018 at 4:28 PM looks like a festive moment...wonderfully done, darlene!...huggs Darlene De Beaulieu August 6, 2018 at 5:54 PM Hello Nette, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend.

Mike Gentile August 5, 2018 at 7:53 AM Sounds like a lot of fun, Darlene!! Happy Sunday xxoo Darlene De Beaulieu August 5, 2018 at 2:29 PM Hello Mike, A rib feat is a lot of fun. The vendors have booths set up with different items to sell. The contest for the best ribs is the best.Yes i did enjoyed it.Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooooo.

Bonnie House August 5, 2018 at 12:29 AM This sounds like our Spiedie Fest which is going on this weekend. We also have hot air balloons at our Fest. Yours sounds good also. Darlene De Beaulieu August 5, 2018 at 2:43 PM Darlene De Beaulieu August 5, 2018 at 2:32 PM Hello Bonnie, there was no hot air balloon ride but there was other things going on. Have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 7:00 PM Sounds like fun. I am originally from Northern Ontario. I now life in the Okanagan Valley on Lake Okanagan here in BC Darlene De Beaulieu August 5, 2018 at 2:47 PM Hello Robert. What part of northern Ontario did you come from? I have lived in Wiarton Ontario for 10 years.I liked it there, i miss it. I hear that BC. is beautiful. have a nice day my friend.