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Rib Festival In Paisley

Every summer in Paisley Ontario On a huge grassy park field A festival is held every summer Constants set up their gear Then begin to cook the ribs After cooked add their secret Visitors are given special cards They have to rate the ribs eaten People go from booth to booth Tasting all the different ribs Then at the end of the day The ballets are counted The winner wins a prize It is dining out to eat The prize is for two and a movie

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Freddie Vassallo

Date: 9/3/2018 7:43:00 AM

The subject is good, the form is wrong, it is not a sonnet. It is a free verse poem. To call this poem a Sonnet is a sin. Why no punctuation at all and no spaces and the ending. I repeat again is is a well-written poem. I cannot understand when the forms of poems are there to check and learn. I am sorry but the truth hurts.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2018 3:08:00 PM

I can not get you on Soup Mail to talk to you. I have tried. Your name is not on the list. I sometimes have trouble knowing the differences of different poetry form. I try hard to get it right. I alwasy do my best.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2018 3:00:00 PM

Hello Freddie Vassallo,thank you for telling me about my poem.I now know it is a Free Verse.No I am not upset about your comment. I now know that this verse ia Free Verse.Have a nice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/7/2018 2:45:00 PM

I'm vegetarian, lacto, ovo, peska; still it sounds like fun.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2018 7:43:00 PM

Hello M.L. Kiser, A ribfest is a lot of fun. Ribs ate made differently, so it makes the contest interesting. Have a nice evening my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2018 4:28:00 PM

looks like a festive moment...wonderfully done, darlene!...huggs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2018 5:54:00 PM

Hello Nette, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/5/2018 7:53:00 AM

Sounds like a lot of fun, Darlene!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2018 2:29:00 PM

Hello Mike, A rib feat is a lot of fun. The vendors have booths set up with different items to sell. The contest for the best ribs is the best.Yes i did enjoyed it.Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooooo.

Bonnie House

Date: 8/5/2018 12:29:00 AM

This sounds like our Spiedie Fest which is going on this weekend. We also have hot air balloons at our Fest. Yours sounds good also.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2018 2:43:00 PM

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2018 2:32:00 PM

Hello Bonnie, there was no hot air balloon ride but there was other things going on. Have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/4/2018 7:00:00 PM

Sounds like fun. I am originally from Northern Ontario. I now life in the Okanagan Valley on Lake Okanagan here in BC

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2018 2:47:00 PM

Hello Robert. What part of northern Ontario did you come from? I have lived in Wiarton Ontario for 10 years.I liked it there, i miss it. I hear that BC. is beautiful. have a nice day my friend.