Anitha Jayasankar Poet Rhyme

Ria's Butterflies - Nursery Rhyme

Little Ria's eyes found
Butterflies fluttering around
Pink, purple and blue

She followed them around
Soft wind blew
And up up they flew!



Date: 03/09/2021
Submitted for: Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Malabika Ray Choudhury March 20, 2021 at 6:13 PM Nursery rhymes are fun, aren't they? Yours is lovely! Hugs ~ Mala

Unseeking Seeker March 13, 2021 at 10:07 PM Wow! Enchanting nursery rhyme! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2021 at 3:48 PM Adorable!! Congrats, dear. yes, you must try kyrielle. It's a favorite form of mine. You just have to find a godo catch phrase for the ending lines of each stanza

Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2021 at 3:08 AM - Back with congratulations, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 12, 2021 at 2:55 AM Creative winner. Congrats. Way to go. Sara

Carol Mitra March 11, 2021 at 5:29 PM So cute Ani...loved it :) Congrats on your win...much love and hugs.

Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 5:08 PM Just adorable, Ani! Congrats on your high placement in Eve's contest. Light and joy, Gershon

Eve Roper March 11, 2021 at 2:36 PM Anitha, wonderful Nursery rhyme, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 2:24 PM this is so charming, , many congrats on your win Anitha:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. March 11, 2021 at 1:21 PM Hi Anitha, This is so cute adorable. And so age-appropriate. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Supraja Kannan March 11, 2021 at 5:10 AM So cute... Reads like a winner...

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2021 at 5:30 PM this is just adorable and very fitting for really young children. I had not noticed it was a contest for kids under 5, so I wonder if my rhyme is a bit too difficult.ha!! Wish I could see more but gotta get dinner in the oven

Darlene De Beaulieu March 9, 2021 at 3:37 PM Hello Anitha, a beautiful scene you painted with your words. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Victor Buhagiar March 9, 2021 at 10:04 AM I love the simplicity of this nursery rhyme, cute too. Makes a great image.

Susan Lawrence March 9, 2021 at 9:16 AM Ani, Sweet and lovely ! Reminds me of childhood wonder ! All best luck in the contest. Hugs to you. Your friend, Susan :)

Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2021 at 7:52 AM I enjoyed this delicate write. Hugs Rick.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2021 at 6:17 AM - A cute nursery rhyme, Ani :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh March 9, 2021 at 6:10 AM Love this. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina