Rhythmn of a River

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Rolling with the R's Poerty Contest

Sponsor Nette Onclaud

5/8/2025

                                                Rivers
                                          Of rising rhymes
                                       Rapidly flow like rain
                                 Refilling my repertoire realm
                           Refreshing the reservoirs of my mind
                                   Releasing reliable words
                                Written and reviewed, then.
                                       Release Rhythmic
                                                Rivers

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2025 1:20:00 PM

Wow great job and metaphorical too. Belated congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2025 7:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Christine :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2025 6:08:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I think I need to look at the form again to see if I am missing something in the way they are supposed to be written. Sara K

Christine Watts
Date: 8/5/2025 12:37:00 PM

Hi Sara Thanks for your review. I hope it meets requirements, maybe a little left field lol, but fun trying Cheers Christine