Rhythm of the Circle

Rhythm of soft sand,
Rules shaped in grace, not in stone—
Trust in sacred rounds,
Voices calm the storm ahead,
Spirit grows in gentle care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 8:40 PM
Rules shaped in grace not stone…well said!
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Thank you! I’ve always felt grace has a way of softening the edges where stone would only close the door.
Kendrick Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Yes, the spirit grows in gentle care, so we need to always remember that. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Velasco Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 8:24 PM
Absolutely, Sara—gentle care really does make all the difference. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind thoughts!
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