Rhythm of Man

The shining sun twinkling on the water,
Like a thousand fireflies dancing,
On glazed mirror reflections prancing,
The twinkles of stars alter
Perceptions.

In the moonlight I hear the darkness,
Like a million cackles of the mad,
In an echo chamber of the sad,
Contrasted in a complete starkness
Illusions.

Trees sway with a natural rhythm,
Like a singularity of purpose found,
Above the fray of this unholy ground,
The swaying of men has a rhythm
Veracious.

The shining sun twinkling on the water,
Like those that dance in the fire 
I speak the earth,
And I scold the rock,
Gracious.

Deep inside the muddy cave
Down where you deprave
Deeper see where you enslave
The emotion to the bedrock,
Stopping now infinity's clock
Perspicacious.

There above in shining gold
A light you see in darkest hold
Allow it in, then you are free
Guided how angels see
Luminous.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/10/2014 9:11:00 AM
A sparkling cosmic imagery poem! Twinkling brilliant shining yor talent. Pls review my latest poem too.
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Date: 2/10/2014 5:47:00 AM
Tim an excellent write, love the last line of each...David
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Date: 2/8/2014 7:34:00 PM
Thank you for your beautiful take on nature it is a nice vision you've displayed for me. loved aharing in your imaginations through these special lines you've weaved for me to share on this cold winter's evening. cheri glad also you enjoyed my graveyard of ships i enjoyed reading your nice comment.
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:38:00 PM
This is another wonderful write by you, my friend! I really enjoyed reading this natural poem this evening Tim! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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