Supraja Kannan Poet Rhyme

Rhythm of Heaven

Whirl whirl whirl
Like the fallen feathers
Turn, fall and again swirl
Go go go
As the wind drives by
Just don't stop the flow
Glide glide glide
Through the great vast world
Just relax and relish the fun ride
Fly fly fly
Just cleave the clouds
And touch the dazzling sky
Bring bring bring 
The rhythm of heaven
Through the words you sing

September 17 2021 

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Anitha Jayasankar September 18, 2021 at 11:11 PM "Just cleave the clouds and touch the dazzling sky"... so beautiful ...loved the rhythm and flow... Have a blessed lovely day dear Supraja... ~ Ani

Victor Buhagiar September 17, 2021 at 6:14 AM There is a profound message in your poem Supraja. Loved the technique of writing this poem You did well. Hugs.

Vijay Pandit September 17, 2021 at 6:13 AM Rhythmic and uplifting--well done, Supraja.

Demetrios Trifiatis September 17, 2021 at 5:52 AM An enchanting poem that brings joy to the heart, dearest Supraja! Hugs xxx

Rama Balasubramanian September 17, 2021 at 5:29 AM Lovely! Gives a sense of freedom which is joyous.

Heidi Sands September 17, 2021 at 5:23 AM So beautiful and with a sense of freedom too. I love it. A Fave for me :)