Rhythm of a River

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Frederic Parker.

Contest- Rolling with the Rs 8/4/25

sponsor-Nette Onclaud

Rhythm of a river meanders timelessly with shallow edies that lie still until the season's tempo moves along and I hear haunting siren's call when the river flows by in unbroken rhythm

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/4/2025 11:16:00 AM

- The rhythm of the river is always changing... a great poem, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2025 11:04:00 AM

Just gorgeous. I feel like I missed something. I have not posted mine yet, but i interpreted something she said to mean we should use lots of R words. Mine is a bit humorous beause it was the only way I could think to do the one "room for rent"!