Rhythm and Verse

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Light the fire going under my pen resuscitating. Ignite off the force of my cerebrum patching. Until they get instilled into the mind mending. Feelings burn, and the paper goes to ashes thundering Riddle through the extra verses for refrains captivating Extract the theme from the section persevering. Till an epiphany is by all accounts sparling. Additionally, my pen is once again glimmering. Additionally, my pen is once again glimmering. Written: August 28, 2021

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/28/2021 5:07:00 PM

Indeed! Your gifted pen is always glimmering! My dear friend, Lasaad, this is simply beautiful. I adore the emotion and imagery and the refrain of your last two lines is especially effective. Have a wonderful weekend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/28/2021 5:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, your wonderful comment is so uplifting to me, and I really appreciate it. Have a blessed evening, dear friend

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/28/2021 1:23:00 PM

I don't think it every stopped glimmering Lasaad, nicely written well penned :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/28/2021 1:45:00 PM

Thanks, Rose; your comment is so uplifting and appreciated. Have a wonderful weekend